tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554081034570990127.post1131407072264984390..comments2011-11-27T22:49:33.003-08:00Comments on A piece of my mind: Occupy Wall Street, and its Similarities to the Arab SpringRenee Sweishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00052951299969535935noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7554081034570990127.post-16878214213753582652011-10-14T11:15:42.463-07:002011-10-14T11:15:42.463-07:00The writer has a good grasp of what's going on...The writer has a good grasp of what's going on in NY - and shows that she has done some excellent research, too.<br /><br />I think it would be more powerful to simply state - in this piece - the commonalities between the two movements, if the writer thinks they are there.<br /><br />The content is good, but the execution via typography makes it very difficult to read. One suggestion is to fix the dangling sentences and paragraphs so it looks more tidy.<br /><br />As published, I would wager it was written in a word processing program and then pasted into place.<br /><br />That's fine - but needs to be fixed before the next column is written.Michael J. Fitzgeraldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09840859418177870381noreply@blogger.com